breaking point by:amanda davis
BREAKING POINT
Chapter 1- There’s no escape
In a cold night at Netorya, a loving couple and two kids were out roaming the streets. They were out getting their oldest son, XL, a new book at the local library. Suddenly while they were just about to go in they heard yelling and screeching.
Not knowing what to do they quickly ran away. While they were running XL spotted something above him. “D-D-Demons!!! Run XL!! Quickly!!”, his mother screamed.
After hearing this the demon smiled and said,” Are you non-demons ready to die?!” XL gasped. The two demons landed. One of them grabbed XL and the other demon handed a gun to XL’s little brother,Stephein, and yelled, “Shoot your parents!!! If NOT you will watch your brother’s death instead!!
Stephein began to cry. ” I-I-I don’t-I don’t know what to dooo!” “STOP IT”, XL yells. The demon throws him to the ground. The other demon snatched the gun from Stephein’s hands and hits him in the face with the gun ready to shoot XL. Stephein screamed in terror while he fell to the ground. Their parents couldn’t watch anymore. “STOP”,they yelled. “PLEASE!! Kill us…NOT our children!
The demon took his gun away from XL and pointed it at his parents. “Gladly”, he said. Shots ring out as the parents fell to the ground,motionless. The demons then ripped out their throughts and slapped XL in the face with his bloodied hands.Smiling. He left XL’s face covered with his own parents blood. He falls to his knees with his eyes wide open with disbelief.
Chapter 2- Red Snow
“Alright class, today is the Algebra test”,says their teacher. “Awwww I don’t wanna take the test, Kim”, says Kelly. “Mr.Ren is totally stupid!!”
XL picks his head up from the desk and wipes the drool off his face,saying, “Would you annoying girls shut up! Can’t you see I’m trying to sleeeep.”
“Well excuse me”
“Okay,that’s enough Kelly and XL”,says Mr. Ren. “No,whatever it’s fine, I’m leaving”, says XL. Followed up by Kelly saying, “Ha. Yea thats right. Walk away coward.” XL turns, looks her straight in the eyes, and punches her right in the face. Right when he walks out of the classroom, the bell rings.
“Ugh. Its cold.” XL walks near a bench. When he sat down on the bench his phome starts ringing. The caller I.D says unknown. “Hello?”, he answers. “Hello”, says the unknown man. “I must speak with you. Meet me at Old Lake Road.” XL’s confused. He asks the man questions like, “Who are you? Why should I go there? How did you get my number?”
The unknown man hung up without answering a single question. XL sits in silence,thinking, ” I know this persons voice. But who is it?
XL wanders around, while looking at the pitch black crows. And pure white snow. After a while he realizes that he has ended up at Old Lake Road. In the distance he sees a man in a long black coat. The man walks towards XL saying,” Nice to finally meet you, the amazing XL.” “Ha. Yea i guess”, said XL feeling a little insecure. “Well XL i need to tell you something…. Your in grave danger. ‘They’ are out to kill you.” “What are you talking about?! Your insane!” “Hmmmm… Thats sad. You don’t even know your own kind.” XL looks at him with disbelief. “Yes …your a demon. You have the power to bring people back to life with your bite. You also have amazing strength.” “Get away from me!”
“You can’t hide it much longer. Your evil side will win.”
“SHUT UP”,yells XL, while kicking him in the face. The man lies there, coughing up blood. The blood soaks in the snow. XL laughs. “DID you forget I’m a demon?”
The man smiles. “Your back.”
Chapter 3- Dead silence
While smiling the man disappears also leaving a trail of blood, leading to a dark and gloomy house. XL follows the blood and walks in saying,”What the…. Why did you disappear?” He suddenly hears a whisper that says,” She here….” XL goes and looks in all the rooms to find that whisper…that voice….
Finally he got to the end of the hall. He opens the last door he hasn’t checked. Suddenly he hears something…or someone crash through a window. He runs inside the room and sees a body laying there with many shards scattered across the floor. The body had many wounds like “it” had just been in a fight. With the body passed out on the floor he wonders, “Human or demon.” He makes the decision that shes probably a demon. He walks up to her and pulls her hair while.holding a knife to her neck. He whispers in silence….,” What are you doing here?”
There’s a moment where its silent. Dead silence…. Suddenly the girl turns over and kicks XL in the face. He falls on his back. He quickly reaches for her ankle and pulls her down on a piece of broken glass. She screams with terror. He, with no mercy, gets on top of her and screams in her face,” I’m ONLY gonna say this once, ‘WHO are you and WHAT are you doing here?’” She says in a frightnened voice,almost out of breath, ” I-I don’t know.” Then suddenly replies,” Ignorant boy you shouldn’t have let your guard down.”
She grabs a knife from the floor and pushes him hard against a wall. Then XL replies choking on his words,”I DIDN’T!” He throws her against a wall making a deeep round dent. Then he pulls out from his coat a rader gun that was passed down from many generations. “STOP”, she screams, terrified. He points the gun at her face making a “click” sound. The unknown man suddenly appears in front of her in a way of protection. XL yells,” Get out of the way or I’ll shoot both of your heads clean off of your body and put them on a platter!” The man slaps the gun out of XL’s hand. The girl immediatly catches it before it falls because she knows that it might go off.
XL yells,”What ARE you doing!!! Don’t touch my gun! The man yells back,” Can’t you see we’re just trying to help you!” The man quickly takes out a dart gun from his coat and points it right at XLs chest. “See ya later,” the man says with a smile.
Hours later XL wakes up in pain with chains all around him. He feels dizzy, like everything around him is moving. He’s in a place that looks like a basement. It has chains all around the room…also there’s the scent and sight of fresh blood splattered across the floor and smeared against the wall.
The unknown man walks down the crickety stairs making a painful noise. The man says with a sly smile,”I can’t believe you don’t know who I am.” Then the man takes off his coat and throws it on the fresh blood. XL screams,” Mr. Ren!!” The man shook his head. He grabs the end of his “face” and pulls it off, saying ,”My name is Relex.” Then the girl walks slowly down the stairs with her arms across her chest. While taking off her coat, that reveals her face says, “My name is Vanidy”
Relex says,” Lets see if he’s one of them.” What?!”, asks XL . Relex picks up a bag filled with fresh blood. He grabs a chain that’s around XL neck wraps the chain around the bag of blood. He then hangs it from the shower above him. The tighter he pulls the more pain he feels. Relex reveals his claws from the tip of his fingernails and pokes a hole in the blood bag.
The blood drips on XL’s face. He starts blinking trying not to get the blood in his eyes. Suddenly his eyes turn a very pale blue. Then his pale blue eyes turn into thick red ruby eyes. With the blood dangling above him he strains himself from trying not to feast on the blood. Vanidy shields her eyes from seeing XL gorge at the blood.
When he’s finally done he says,” I WANT MORE!” He breaks free from his chains with a strong desire. Wanting more, he looks into Vanidy’s eyes with his red ruby eyes. She…falls to her knees crying. Relex gets in front of her and yells at XL,”Stop!!” Then very quickly XL sinks his fangs down Relex’s neck. Relex grabs XL by the shirt and throws him against a wall and says,while yelling in pain, “I’m ALREADY a vampire!”
Chapter 5- The Demon Inside
Vanidy pleads for them to stop. While crying she picks up the closest thing to her….a rock. She then try to throw it at them,with all her might. To her luck she hits Relex in the head. He falls to his knees and lies on the bloody floor which is technically there blood that made it so bloody on the floor…in the first place.
While Relex was lying on the floor unconscious, XL was standing there with blood running down his face. He was about to go finish Relex off when suddenly Vanidy yells,”Stop! I’m the one you want aren’t I?! I won’t have you kill Relex!” XL walks slowly over to her. He stares her dead in the eyes with his piercing red eyes and long white fangs. He grabs her neck and she starts to cry. Out of the blue he kisses her. At first her eyes…wide open. She’s shocked out of her mind. She doesn’t know what to think but eventually got pulled in by his kiss. And kisses him right back.
A moment later he says,” I can’t finish a beautiful lady without a bite to eat first.” He strokes her neck. Then licks it. Vanidy shudders. She’s tense and she can’t move.
While she crys she can hear her heart beat and wonders,” Is he awake or his he still a rapid monster?”
Suddenly there’s a crash upstairs. Relex finally wakes up. Vanidy runs behind Relex and says,”I’m sorry I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to make you pass out.” Relex gets up and tries to put XL back in his chains, but suddenly three black hooded people walked down the stairs making a loud noise. XL sniffs the air,and whispers in an angry expression, ” Demons.” Another demon starts walking down the stairs and XL realizes that this one is a girl. She was wearing a red coat, unlike the others. She walks towards him and stands right in XL’s face. She grabs his neck and holds him against a wall. She peirces him with her long sharp nails and makes him bleed. She then says,” You must be confused. Let me explain. I am here for one reason and one reason only… Your blood and the sight of your dead body.” XL yells in pain,while choking, “I guess…you came for nothing then?!” He kicks her in the stomach really hard and she hits a wall knocking the wind right out of her.
While gasping for air she says,”Kill them…but I want that one alive.” She points at XL. Two guards attack Relex while the third one attacks XL. Relex knocks them both off of his back and they hit a wall. He screams at XL,” THROW ME YOUR GUN!!” XL says,”WHYYYYY!!” While attacking the third demon. Relex yells back,”Because your GUN is the only gun that can kill a demon!” With hesitation XL throws the gun ,with all his might, to Relex. Relex grabs it quickly and blows both of the demons heads off their body. Then XL grabs the third demons head and rips it right off with his bare hands. XL looks over at the red hooded female. He quickly runs over and punches her in the face. Which knocks out one of her white fangs. She screams at XL,” I’ll find you…. Then I’LL KILL YOU…XAVIER LUCIFER!!!”
She smiles and disappears. XL thinks to himself,” How did she know my real name?” He bends down and picks up the pearly white fang from her red lipped mouth and says,while looking at it,”Not if I find you first.”
I LOVE DA!! AND HERE’S A LINK TO MY 1CH TO BREAKING POINT..!!! HOPE U LIKE PEOPL’SSS.. http://deviantgirl28.deviantart.com/journal/breaking-point-ch1-there-s-no-escape-by-Amanda-D-270580916
do you think this stuffed animal look’s like jared leto????

what do you think….. and the stuffed animal was a gift!!! i love jared leto
this is my character XL……do you like my art????? (*v*)…this is just 1 of my painted and drew!…. and i also write music i hope to become a singer!!!!

